tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6010942979784569627.post8930647852379794221..comments2024-02-06T04:20:38.551-08:00Comments on Reading, Writing, Revising: ShorteningLisa Ecksteinhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11469107523441985396noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6010942979784569627.post-60073590070273846042013-05-11T10:50:12.415-07:002013-05-11T10:50:12.415-07:00That's a good idea, and you're not the onl...That's a good idea, and you're not the only reader who pointed out that a visual representation would be helpful. If I do another entry like this, I'll have to figure out a way to handle that.Lisa Ecksteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11469107523441985396noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-6010942979784569627.post-18344981809909015462013-05-09T15:59:41.734-07:002013-05-09T15:59:41.734-07:00This was useful! And not boring, to me, at least....This was useful! And not boring, to me, at least. :) I think it would be easier to read this kind of thing if you could either show the passages side by side, or possibly show it as a single passage with the revisions highlighted. But I'm not actually sure how easy that would be to pull off, and for a passage this short, it doesn't really matter. laurenhatnoreply@blogger.com