September 16, 2016

Double Revision

After a wonderfully hectic summer filled with great visits to and from family members, I'm happy to be immersed in writing again this month. I'm enjoying having plenty of uninterrupted time to write, and I'm excited about moving forward on projects with some new goals and motivations.

Recently I received some very helpful advice and encouragement about THE EXTENT OF THE DAMAGE, and that's inspired me to embark on yet another revision. The focus of my previous revision was shortening the manuscript, and I cut over 20% while keeping the plot more or less the same. This time, I have suggestions and ideas about improving some parts of the story that aren't as strong as the rest. I'm planning to add new elements and remove others that aren't working, ideally while keeping the length about the same, which I'm sure will require further use of the compactness techniques I relied on last time.

I started off by rereading the manuscript, which I hadn't really looked at in more than a year. As always happens after time away, I saw plenty I wanted to change, but I was heartened by how much of the novel I was happy with. Before the last revision, my reread of the previous draft put me to sleep at points and left me wondering if gremlins had rewritten my sentences for incoherency. It was an enormous relief to not have a repeat of that experience and to confirm I'm actually making the book better with each edit. I was also pleased to notice that some of my thoughts about improving sentences and paragraphs came out of what I learned from the writing and critique in the class I just took.

I'm now on the next step of revision, the planning stage. I've written before (while in the middle of a still earlier, quite lengthy revision) about the value of planning and the danger it can morph into procrastination. I think I'm doing okay at the moment. I'm outlining the changes I want to make and trying to figure out the best options for the story. Some of my notes are lists of pros and cons for different plot directions. Some include comments like "but is it all just too ridiculously melodramatic?" and "this needs to conclude whatever the conclusion turns out to be". It's a process. I'm making good headway, and the plan is gradually coming together.

I don't think I've blogged at all about the writing software Scrivener, which I began using a couple of years ago, I believe when I was preparing for the previous revision. It's a powerful application with a lot of features, and I'm starting to use more of these than I had before, though nowhere near all of them. Maybe later I'll write about my Scrivener techniques, but for now, here's a screenshot from my revision planning:

revision planning in Scrivener

While I figure out the novel plot, I'm also warming up for the actual rewriting part by revising one of my short stories for class. This is helping me get into the revision groove, and it's getting the story in shape for submitting to literary magazines. I'm through the scribbling-on-paper step and onto the agonizing-over-sentences stage. I've signed up for Duotrope, a database of literary markets with a submission tracker, and I'm looking forward to sending my story out into the world.

short story printout with handwritten notes

Good Stuff Out There:

→ Jason Black shares tips on revising for pacing with the help of spreadsheets: "How do you look at fifty to a hundred thousand words all at once to see the ebb and flow of your story? ... My novel takes place over 20 days/chapters, and has a dozen or so story elements--plots, subplots, and themes--I need to keeping track of. So, I decided to make a huge spreadsheet with columns for each day and rows for each element."


laurenhat said...

Yay!! More revision! :D Looking forward to further updates (including about Scrivener). Also, this comment made me laugh and want to reblog with a #gpoy tag: "this needs to conclude whatever the conclusion turns out to be".

Lisa Eckstein said...

Yeah, endings are hard!

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